With closed eyes

SylvieMember

What if I draw your lips
So very, very close to mine,

And with closed eyes...

Almost feel the fire
Consuming us with desire!

What if I draw your hands
Wrapped thight around my waist,

And with closed eyes...

Almost feel you move
Deep inside of me

As if you are
Never far
But a breath away...

Wherever you are now
Wherever you may ever be

With closed eyes
Always can I
Dream you...
Feel you...
So close to me!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

© Sylvie Giroux 2008

12/4/0810:14 AM

❤️ 0

Original Post

Replies sorted oldest to newest

yokoMember

Dear Sylvie, it is very nice to see you back on Givnology.
I have missed reading your beautiful poetry.

Thank you.
This poem is very sensitive
and filled with deep emotion.

Love,
yoko

Attachments

Hide

Images (1)

12/5/087:19 PM

❤️ 0

IndaMerit-Amun

Thank you dear Sylvie for sharing your lovely and very sensitive poem with us.

It is very nice to see you back on Givnology.
We have missed you.

Love, Inda
**********

Susa Seddon Boulet

Attachments

Hide

Images (1)

12/6/089:13 AM

❤️ 0

MargheritaMember

Welcome back, dear Sylvie! I am really happy to find you here today.

Ahh, when we close our eyes a new world opens and brings powerful emotions, like your beautiful poem!

Passionate and tender all together!

Love,
Margherita

12/6/087:24 PM

❤️ 0

Vicky2Member

Welcome back dear Sylvie.
Thank you for posting your beautiful poem for us to read.

Love,
Vicky

12/8/087:30 AM

❤️ 0

GiseleMember

Thank you Sylvie.
I have missed you too.
Thank you for coming back and sharing your poetry with us once again.

Sincerely,
Gisele

12/8/087:43 AM

❤️ 0

Sue 1Member

Thank you Sylvie.

It is nice to read your poetry again,
and very nice to find you on Givnology.
I think that we all have missed you.

Love,
Sue

12/8/087:47 AM

❤️ 0

TeoAvatar State

Aaahhhh.. serene Sylvie! How uplifting!

Thank you for giving us this KILIWIA STARANZA DANEBE gift!

And what beautiful responces... mmm... love echoes!

quote:
Originally posted by dear Margherita:
Welcome back, dear Sylvie! I am really happy to find you here today.

Ahh, when we close our eyes a new world opens and brings powerful emotions, like your beautiful poem!

Passionate and tender all together!

Amen and Awomen!