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EriccMember

To be this.

The vanished drop that rained its
final grace across the reaches
of your cheek.

To be this.

The summers warmth caught to the
breeze...as it brushes soft
against your skin.

To be this.

To be the more that waits past
the limits of desire.

To be...

This.

Love,
Eric

11/27/0310:57 AM

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IndaMerit-Amun

Thank you Eric,

Your words are as gentle
as the dewdrops from heaven.

Love, Inda

[This message was edited by Inda on Thursday November 27th, 2003 at 05:37 PM.]

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11/27/037:47 PM

jaicie114Member

"To be the more that waits past the limits of desire"

Dear Eric...

If you get any more romantic and beautiful, I'm afraid you'll ascend too soon and leave us desiring to follow you in order to hear your songs in the realms of heaven.

Love and Light...jc

This much I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

11/27/038:07 PM

GiseleMember

This is really beautiful addition
to all the other poetry that you have shared with us.

Thank you very much,
Gisele

11/28/033:51 PM

TeoAvatar State

Beautiful. Touching. Wow.

Reminds me.. the vanished.. how back in the day I used to read your poems and cry tears of .. love? something magical.. but now I keep "sober" and .. just

remember

Wow thanks for sharing your wordsmithness with us buddy! Love and light, Teo

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11/29/035:16 PM

Sue (Guest)

Thank you Eric.

Your poetry is always beautiful.

Sue

Vicky2Member

Thank you Eric.

This is again very beautiful.
Sincerely,
Vicky

Sylvie GirouxMember

Hey Sonny...

Romantic soul!! ...this is beautiful and filled with love.

Peace Merlin...the Wizard of love.
The love fairy

hehehe

12/19/036:53 AM

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