Tim! Tim oh Tim oh Tim,
I forgot to say..
What
Heaven you bring Sharing your poetry with us! Such a blessing. Thank YOU and thanks Creator. Amen!
Hopefully you don't mind, on your welcome, if I use your poem as an example for these eager students of givnologizing? he he
So Now
And was it the last kiss That spared this helpless life Such tender lips That caresses my soul
Tasted by the fruit of heaven As a succulent strawberry So sent this beautiful angel
Again lifted from dejection Of life’s tarnished stains Which hang around my neck Strangling my essence Drifting into dimness I now live again
So now Life is revealed
Thank you, Sweet angel
by: Tim Cannon
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So Now
And was it the last kiss That spared this helpless life Such tender lips That caresses my soul
Tasted by the fruit of heaven As a succulent strawberry So sent this beautiful angel
Again lifted from dejection Of life’s tarnished stains Which hang around my neck Strangling my essence Drifting into dimness I now live again
So now Life is revealed
Thank you, Sweet angel
by: Tim Cannon
|
So Now
And was it the last kiss That spared this helpless life Such tender lips That caresses my soul
Tasted by the fruit of heaven As a succulent strawberry So sent this beautiful angel
Again lifted from dejection Of life’s tarnished stains Which hang around my neck Strangling my essence Drifting into dimness I now live again
So now Life is revealed
Thank you, Sweet angel
by: Tim Cannon
|
If anyone wants to see how that was done just click the quote icon and it'll show you the code. I'm considering making the 'help' so that people can post pictures (and sounds!) with posts really accessible. Like a "posting help" button always visible with samples of the code to do it, eh?
Tim, the blessings are manyfold, you share this delicious poem, and our Givnologers are so excited to put poems over beautiful images.. thank you for being our class sample.. he he..
Love and many blessings to you and yours, Teo
Teo's presence:
Givnology forums,
freeboards,
tradigital music,
Third Millennium Thinking,
new mediaMay we have enough compassion so that people with solutions for us all can bring them to us without fear[This message was edited by admin on Friday January 16th, 2004 at 07:25 PM.]