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ViiveMember

dancing a slower dance,

as the wind in the reeds -
you play me

your breath like fingers,
a gentle song upon my heartstrings,
a tune echoing forever in the longing,
the wind, the waxing moon
my life a web,
caught
in this moment
of moonlit perfection.

Viive, 21.06.2004

6/22/0410:18 AM

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IndaMerit-Amun

Thank you Viive.

Your poem touches the heartstrings.
Love, Inda

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TeoAvatar State

"as the wind in the reeds..."

Such a tender loving poem dear Viive. Thanks so much for sharing it! Aaaaahh.. "May I have this dance?" he he..

Love n light, Teo

6/22/0410:48 PM

Vicky2Member

Thank you Viive.
This is a very beautiful poem.

Love
Vicky

EriccMember

Beautiful Viive.

Love,
Eric

GiseleMember

Thank you Viive.
This is beautifully written.

Sincerely,
Gisele

MargheritaMember

Dear Viive, this is beautiful and very stirring ...
Love, Margherita

"moonlit perfection" ... Dwight Cook "Moonlit Sea"

7/25/0410:46 AM

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