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Let's see, HTML just MIGHT be active here.. meaning automatic playing when you open this topic!

Guess I should add:

The Abyss

And I stood
upon
the
ridge
the abyss stretching
endlessly
within
and I knew that I could
not yet
fly
with such weight
upon
my heart,
Shame
Fear
Anger
Judgement,
All lead
to the soul that yearns
for Gold.
Tears formed and fell
violent as a summer storm
and just as brief,
the storm subdued.
And so I stood
upon
the ridge
the abyss stretching
endlessly
within
and knew that I could
not yet fly
with such weight
upon
my heart,
So I gave my heart to love,
I leapt
and I flew.

-Ericc

Now (July 4th, 2009), this is all in the Wellbeing link on ALL pages of Givnology!

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May you find yourself in the world, and may you enjoy the company.

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IndaMerit-Amun

Dear Teo,
Thank you for sharing your beautiful music and Eric's deeply touching poem.

This creates a longing in my soul.

Love, Inda

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6/30/036:47 PM

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GiseleMember

Thank you for the music, it is really beautiful,
and so is the poem. I am enjoying both very much.
The images are great.

Gisele

7/1/035:06 PM

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Vicky (Guest)

Thank you.
This is beautiful music
and nice poetry.

I am enjoying both very much.

Sincerely,
Vicky

7/7/037:36 AM

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Sue (Guest)

Thank you for the beautiful music
and poetry.

The images are nice also.

Sue

7/7/037:38 AM

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Sylvie GirouxMember

Yeah...it worked and this is beautiful.
Merlin's poem with music...awwwwwww

Thanks Captain Uni-Verse.
Staranza

7/7/038:38 AM

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MargheritaMember

Thank you dear Teo for sharing this moment of beauty and grace. Two wondrous talents perfectly harmonizing!
Love, Margherita

7/7/036:59 PM

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IndaMerit-Amun

I found someone who flew out of The Abyss
to join in the enchanting Morning Song.

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Vicky (Guest)

I really like this little songbird.
I am glad he is joining in the beautiful morning concert. It makes me feel that I am out in beautiful nature with angels song.

Vicky

7/8/037:17 AM

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Vicky2Member

I always loved this poem,
I am sure we could create some very powerful music for it.

quote:
The Abyss

And I stood
upon
the
ridge
the abyss stretching
endlessly
within
and I knew that I could
not yet
fly
with such weight
upon
my heart,
Shame
Fear
Anger
Judgement,
All lead
to the soul that yearns
for Gold.
Tears formed and fell
violent as a summer storm
and just as brief,
the storm subdued.
And so I stood
upon
the ridge
the abyss stretching
endlessly
within
and knew that I could
not yet fly
with such weight
upon
my heart,
So I gave my heart to love,
I leapt
and I flew.

-Ericc

Love,
Vicky

6/1/091:34 PM

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IndaMerit-Amun

Thank you for the post Teo.
It is amazing what all is stored in Givnology.

Love, Inda

This little birdie woke up, and is listening to the morning concert; pretty soon he will join in.

12/7/108:02 AM

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IndaMerit-Amun

Nice post. Thank you Teo and Eric.

4/26/1711:42 AM

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Vicky2Member

Thank you Teo for this original post.

Eric no longer visits us which is kind of sad.

11/30/201:20 PM

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Sue 1Member

Thank you Teo for sharing this old post again.

12/1/201:07 PM

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IndaMerit-Amun

The Abyss

I still enjoy this poem.

12/8/2010:51 AM

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yokoMember

I am afraid that I missed this post.

Lovely words from Eric who sadly is no longer on Givnology;

The Abyss

And I stood
upon
the
ridge
the abyss stretching
endlessly
within
and I knew that I could
not yet
fly
with such weight
upon
my heart,
Shame
Fear
Anger
Judgement,
All lead
to the soul that yearns
for Gold.
Tears formed and fell
violent as a summer storm
and just as brief,
the storm subdued.
And so I stood
upon
the ridge
the abyss stretching
endlessly
within
and knew that I could
not yet fly
with such weight
upon
my heart,
So I gave my heart to love,
I leapt
and I flew.

-Ericc