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I Stand

Straight and tall
I stand
Softly swaying in the breeze

I witness life
The growth of snowdrops
Sheltered in my roots
Pushing always upwards

I witness death
A fading doe staggering through the trees
Her last breaths against me
Becoming part of my being

I witness love
Two young lovers carved a heart into my body
I can feel it now
Beating

I witness hate
A shot fired in anger
Missing, hit the heart
Dead centre

But still I live on
To see all
To see life come and go
To me everyone, everything is equal
Nobody is more worthy of my embrace

Encircling life, death
Love and hate
I stand
Tall
Silhouetted against the sky
Echoing of the past
Reverberating with the events of time
Still
I stand

-- Alanna
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Thank you for your lovely complements, i have just noticed that all of my poems so far have been about trees, they are just so inspiring,
i will however try to write something slightly different next time, just for a change,
Onece more thank You

quote:
I eanjoy reading it, but it also makes me a bit sad.


i am sorry that i have made you sad,:hugs: i will try and be a bit more posotive next time, i dont like making people sad Frown

-- Alanna
I Stand

Straight and tall
I stand
Softly swaying in the breeze

I witness life
The growth of snowdrops
Sheltered in my roots
Pushing always upwards

I witness death
A fading doe staggering through the trees
Her last breaths against me
Becoming part of my being

I witness love
Two young lovers carved a heart into my body
I can feel it now
Beating...

Rudolph



Applause Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem! Applause

Sorry I didn't quote the whole thing, I wanted it to all fit in the one tree image... see... ? Actually, since you are making nice treey-ey poems, and we have nice trees, I'll let you in on what I like to do:

A reason I like Groupee (used to be InfoPop, changed their name) discussion forums is they ALLOW HTML. With that HTML I use a TABLE tag, and the TD or table-data tag can have a background, the part with background= so I put pictures and then text on top! Yay! yay? Anyway, it then entails finding colors that contrast enough for the text to be readable, yet stay somewheres in the context, like the quote above yellow worked for various reasons - black was the first CONTRAST idea, but a tree to talk in black? So like, dreamy posts I put in a color that suits. Then some I like to center - especially short lines things like yours here. So you see, I'm not just "adding some picture," it has a balance, sympathetic embellishing... well, I am a pianist, and we SO OFTEN accompany the real artist eh? I hope you don't mind my nutty improvisation behind your melody?!? RaisedBrows Violin

Oh! If you click the quote icon I believe it'll show you all that I type / code to put pictures behind images. Idea

Love and light being, Teo Do (Re, Mi, Fa...) CoolDance CoolDance

Have the heart of a gypsy, and the dedication of a soldier -Beethoven in Beethoven Lives Upstairs

Last edited by Teo
Lol i love the "nutty improvisation" as you put it, its beautiful, im honoured that you think my words worthy of your time and effort, and the reindeer smily is sooo cute.
Thank you, i wouldent know the first thing about doing what you do, and if your music is as beautiful as your other work (which i bet it is) then you must be a brilliant pianist, my brother is a pianist as well and i know how hard it can be, sometimes although you go for whoever is performing, the real artist is the accompniest who has to mould their performance to what is needed and whithout which the 'artist' would not be nearly as good.

Thank you again

-- Alanna

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