Anyway

Dear AngelEyes,

You writing is very powerful and sensitive at the same time.
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There is always a way out of darkness.

Sincerely,
Gisele

Dear AngelEyes,
I like the way you write, but it is very sad.
May the angels carry your thoughts into the light. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

Love,
Sue

Dear AngelEyes, I love your writing also. It is very touching and sensitive. I also feel a great deal of sadness in your poem.

After darkness there is always light and everything in life is worth it. All things are learning experiences.

Love
Vicky

Dear AngelEyes,

Nice to see you on Givnology.
Your poetry is very beautiful,
but hauntingly sad.

May the angels lift you out of darkness into the light.

Love, Inda

Thank you everyone for our kind comments
I'm looking forward to reading more of the work on this site, and to contributing more of my own, ofcourse

Angel

Thank you again AngelEyes.
I love your poetry.
Thank you for sharing it on Givnology.

Love, Inda

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Originally posted by AngelEyes:
Hi everyone, I have just found and joined this site, and would love to know what the witers on here think of my latest poem. All comments and criticism welcome
Angel

AWESOME!!!

Allow me to "play with" or "collaborate" or just have FUN with your heavenly words...

Anyway Everyday, it gets harder to carry on Every second lasts an hour And every hour is torture Broken hearts can be repaired Is there any truth in that? What if you’re the one who’s breaking hearts? How is it possible To make it easier To get out of bed each day To be able to smile To be able to laugh To forget how worthless your life really is Is there a way back? From despair And how do I find it Will these dark clouds Sit forever in my mind Like a fog of self pity And is it a sin To think of giving up And is it really worth it Anyway?

Powerful words dear EyeAngel! Eye hear ya'! he he.. ok ok not appropriate 2 joke... at least I didn't use the following image for background of your poem.. whew!



But you know, IAngel, we ALL have sadness, it is WHAT YOU DO WITH IT that is.. the thing.. .. I looked up animated angel, found the top image http://wonderflight.com/angel_justice.html and the page being about rights to copy an image, well you are Angel, don't you have the right? Anyway what I'm saying is that in our processes, doing whatever it is that we do, we can find solace and yes, as you asked, there IS truth in that Broken hearts can be repaired! You can "what if" all you like, but hey, any thing with a "..can be.." in it is possible right? Commercials can sell toxic waste and say "this.. COULD be healthy.. CAN BE the greatest medicine in the world..." and get away with it hum???

I'm sorry 1) I have taken so long to answer this great post of yours and 2) my reply is so ungodly looooooong.... dang!?!?! They are connected actually... see.....

I've been working really hard actually, to make Givnology a warm welcoming place for great words and energies like you shared here. Really! So I'm being like the awkward dance floor shiner who is saying... "May I have this dance?" nerviously... in other words...

PLEEEEEASE feel free to share your words! You can put self-help or self-work type of issues in that area/circle/forum category, health issues in that one, you get the idea...

Aaaannnnndddd.. let the healing begin!

Nothin' to it but to do it!

Love and light being, Teo

ps the other image that I DID use behind your words was from here: http://www.btinternet.com/~mtgradwell/ I was looking up "universe of despair" or something.. and well, your "sadness" inspired a great search for me to take on!

Thank you Teo for your images and your very kind words xoxoxox