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Nothing ever seems to be
enough.

We are endless in the cutting sweep of
our appetite.

Hunger is the nature of
flesh -

And we are starved for union.

Perhaps this could be
enough...

To feed only of ourselves in a
holy feast of pleasure.

Or this...

To be filled in a soulful kiss of
met desire.

This...

To fast in the distance of a touch...whetting our
hunger in a slow burn towards each
other.

Yes...this.

This would be enough.



Love,
Eric
 
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wow...
reading your poems always transports me to another place - a very serene and exquisitely beautiful reality...
"fasting in the distance of a touch"

thank you
love Viive
 
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One by one
I take your words
to create a string
and wrap it
around my heart

will this be enough
to feel the union
yearned for
throughout the ages?

One by one
I take your words
to shower
my inner garden
with the freshness
of dew

will this be enough
to quench the thirst
suffered in times
of loneliness?

One by one
I take your words
to fill my hands
with silky rose petals
of enticing fragrance

will this be enough
to meet my desire
of inhaling love
with every breath?

One by one
I take your words
and ...yes
they are enough ...




Dear Eric, your beautiful words surely are magical enough to inspire me!
I love you. Margherita 2Hearts
 
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Merit-Amun
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Dear Eric,

We will always yearn for more of your gentle poems.
Your caressing words are a feast for the soul...
and that is enough.

Love, Inda

 
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Eric this is beautiful!

dpm too!

Now I'm not just "waiting" for more beautiful,

I'm "whetting" too! he he.. 2Hearts 2Hearts 2Hearts

Love n light, Teo Angel Angel Abducted Abducted Bounce Bounce


Walk softly but carry a BIG PEACE
 
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This is another beautiful poem.
I enjoy reading it very much.
Thank you for sharing it with us.

Gisele
 
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To be filled in a soulful kiss of
met desire




This could be enough ...

Love, Margherita 2Hearts Yin-yang Eek 2Hearts
 
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My yearning started
at the beginning of time
and throughout my lives
I found your sweet lips
waiting to touch mine

from "The Kiss" by Margherita


Divine kiss by F. Javid

This could be enough ...

Up you go.
Love, Margherita 2Hearts
 
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Merit-Amun
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This could be enough...

A KISS TO BUILD A DREAM
-Kristin Dorfhuber

 
Posts: 4391 | Location: Toronto, Ontario, Canada | Registered: Sat Apr 26 2003Reply With QuoteReport This Post
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Eric,
The theme has struck a deep chord,the pain/agony/fear/love.



Not Good Enough

I awoke to my the chores complete
and failed by their standards...
I cut the grass and raked the lawn
and felt the chagrin of another...
I finished my days labours on time
and felt the cutting tongue of the owner...
I bought a present for a friend
and ducked from the eyebrow of distain...
I wrote a poem from my well of feelings
and touched me.


stephen
 
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Dear Eric

I agree, this is surely enough...all this...
thank you.
You have all contributed to make this thread
magically beautiful

with Love

Lilie
 
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