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This morning
I came to know
why the soul
is likened with
a bird

as I percieved
a white dove
behind my breastbone

and the movements of
its wings
were the pulsations
of my heat



with love to all

Karima
 
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Dear Karima, this is exquisite. And I understand you felt peace and joy in your heart.
A very beautiful thought, feeling, touch and image.

Love, Margherita Smile

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I’m open to love
my heart invites you to dance
come share my delight


senryu by Margherita
 
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These are simply beautiful words.

Love,
Eric
 
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Dear Karima,

Angel2 Angel2

Your angelic wings have lifted and carried off Givnology to magical realms. We joyously hibit and habit in this heavenly web you weave with your enlightening posts!

Another trip of yours, like riding a magic carpet, floating..

Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem! Uhm.. you wouldn't mind if I use it to experiment with putting the text over bird images like the "new media" link in my signature? Can I .. share with you how to do that in posts? Combining the two you'll surely make mind-bogglingly beautiful .. posts! Clap Angel Wizard

Love and lightbeams, Teo Cloud9 Cloud9

Teo's presents: Givnology forums, tradigital music, Third Millennium Thinking, new media

When we appreciate our diversity we have abundance
 
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Dear Karima. What a beautiful way to begin the day. Thank you, Sue Cat2 Cat2 Cat2
 
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Thank you so very much.
This text is a translation
from the Swedish original.
By all the encouragement
from all of you, I have
started to more and more
trust this creatives side
of myself....now writing
a lot of poems on Swedish
sites..and they like it!

Teo, I would love to learn
from you Ying

Thank you again
 
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Dear Karima, I am happy to hear that you are sharing your poems in original language on Swedish sites too. I am not surprised that they like them! Just these days I thought that I will explore some German sites for this purpose ... but it takes time and right now I am too busy.
But the moment will come ... I really should use my mother tongue more often!

Love, Margherita Smile

Heart and Soul
 
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Karima...

This is an exquisite piece of art. Thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This much I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.
 
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Very beautiful...
 
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