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Aching for you


Your whispers stir
my quiet waters
like puffs of air roaming
through the night,
softly stroking
the well of my soul,
which I feel residing
in the most inconceivable
places under my skin.

Like a worshipping ocean
I arch towards you
my distant power moon,
as your translucent fingers
dance upon my swelling waves
and millions of particles of light
spiral through my depths,
clinging to my vastness
like stardust to a comet.

You make me ache for you ...

With every fiber of my being
I stretch towards
the core of you.
With fearless boldness
I face your tempting flames,
ready to achieve an act of faith
with my joyous leaps
of pure innocence.



Love,
Margherita
 
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Dear Margherita, thank you for this gift.
I will take this beautiful memory with me on my vacation.

Love,
Vicky 2Hearts

 
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Thank you dear Margherita.
This is a beautiful treasure this morning.
It is lovely to read this poem just before we are going on a holiday.

Love,
Sue

 
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Dear Margherita,

Thank you.
This poem is a beautiful gift indeed.
Your writing always inspires me and touches me deeply.

Love, Inda

 
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Beautiful! Indescribeably Delicious!

Applause

Thank you for sharing this magnificent poem with us dearestest dpm (Dancing Pearly Margherita)!!! It is a gem! Wow! I'm blown away... Gorgeous!


quote:
Originally posted by dear Margherita:

as your translucent fingers
dance...



Love and LIGHT BEING, Teom Colors Love2 Hug Cloud9 Cloud9


Walk softly but carry a BIG PEACE


Translucent Fingers
 
Posts: 1755 | Location: The Planet of Berkeley | Registered: Sat Apr 26 2003Reply With QuoteReport This Post
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Thank you for sharing your beautiful writing with us. I am very lucky to be able to come to Givnology while my friends are at work. I am very happy that I could read your new poem before they go on holidays.

Sincerely,
Gisele
 
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Thank you kindly dear Margherita.
I enjoy your poetry very much. It always leaves a deep impression with me.

Love,
yoko

 
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