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By the lake


Water splashes
against the stone
I am sitting on.
Thoughts float
in golden patches
on the lake’s surface.
Words of all times
gather around my
immersed feet.
Every tiny drop
thrown into the air
holds fragments
of your beloved voice.
Memories cross
my mind
and my heart
dances to this tune
echoing from afar.
The sky smiles
at its own reflection
on the glimmering water.
I dive
into this embrace,
suspended between
above and below.
Surrounded by
the sound of
your divine voice,
I share your breath
and life flows
in silent harmony.
The sun bows
to this sacred moment
of love
and the lake glows,
as if competing
with my soul,
in sweet surrender.



Love, Margherita
 
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Dear Margherita, nice to see you back.
Your poem is absolutely beautiful; it is very touching.

Love,
Sue Cat Cat2
 
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Welcome back dear Margherita.
Reading your beautiful poem is the nicest way to start my day.

Love
Vicky 2Hearts

 
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Hi girls, it's nice to find you and your loving words. Thank you.
Hope your holidays were great and that you are both perfectly fit and happy!

The lake for me has a special fascination, as I lived at the lake of Zurich for the whole of my childhood and youth. There is sometimes a veil of melancholy, but for me it has the touch of "Home".

Love and Joy.
Margherita 2Hearts
 
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I am trying to send you the picture of MY lake ...

Love, Margherita

 
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... and this is the EXACT place I am writing about ...

my homeland, I love you!

Love, Margherita

 
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Dear Margherita,
It is wonderful to have you back here.

As always, words fail me when I read your poetry. It touches the soul.

Thank you for the beautiful images of your homeland.

Love, Inda

 
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Thank you dear Inda! I am happy to be back and to find you too.

Your image is of mesmerising beauty and deserves a senryu:

Golden evening

stirs the soul to meditate

and to praise the Lord



Much love and light.

Margherita 2Hearts

 
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Applause 2Hearts Love2



By the lake


Water splashes
against the stone
I am sitting on.
Thoughts float
in golden patches
on the lake’s surface.
Words of all times
gather around my
immersed feet.
Every tiny drop
thrown into the air
holds fragments
of your beloved voice.
Memories cross
my mind
and my heart
dances to this tune
echoing from afar.
The sky smiles
at its own reflection
on the glimmering water.
I dive
into this embrace,
suspended between
above and below.
Surrounded by
the sound of
your divine voice,
I share your breath
and life flows
in silent harmony.
The sun bows
to this sacred moment
of love
and the lake glows,
as if competing
with my soul,
in sweet surrender.


How wonderful dear dpm (Dancing Pearly Margherita), you return to us, and bring back with you THE LOVE OF THE LAKE!!! Yay of yays!

Aaaahhh yes, we have missed you, but what a return! Typing Clap Cloud9

Your beauty is like a giant lake of healthy peaceful bliss. Thank you for beautifying our ol' Givnology memory banks with your sharing visions of heavenly magnificent nature and your pure love words! Yes Yes Yes

You missed the Lucky Duckies post, but hey! Here is there heaven that you share! kiss2


Sending you and all of yours the absolute bestest! Ladysman

Love and light being, Teo Do (Re, Mi, Fa, Soul...) Book Idea CoolDance sweety sweety


Walk softly but carry a BIG PEACE
 
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Thank you dear Teo Do, precious friend and Maestro!

I love your "composition" with my words and my lake very much. And the longing intensifies!

I will go find the Lucky Duckies post ...

Love and Joy.
dpm Love2 2Hearts Smile Smile Smile

On my lake there are many swans and swan families too
 
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Beautiful dear Margherita.

Love,
Eric
 
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Divine Flower...
Once again
Opens up
And every breeze
Carries
Her sweet perfume
Across our world.

And I find myself lost
Within her beautiful essence.


~~~~~~~

What a beautiful poem, dear DF.

Love,
Sylvie


Amritsaya Putrah : We are sons of immortality...
 
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Dear Margherita,

Your beautiful writing, and the images are truly a gift. Thank you.

Sincerely,
Gisele
 
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Thank you too dear Eric, dear Sylvie and dear Gisèle for your loving comments.

The lake is ideal to induce meditation, I could sit and listen for hours without ever being bored.

The lake plays
the tune of peace
in quiet moments
or the roaring notes
of sudden tempest.
Sit and listen
to its voice of truth
and be aware of
divine spirit flowing
through all moments.
Feel the connection
and share the whispers
of life's touching tunes.
Breathe Love Divine
and open to the world.




Love and hugs.
Margherita 2Hearts
 
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