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Red giant meeting


Walking at the pace
of my favorite dreams
I lifted my head
to stop dead in my tracks
as the rising full moon,
huge and blushing like a red giant,
punched me right into the center
of my solar plexus.
Gasping for air
I swelled and stretched
to his magnetic pull
expanding my surface
becoming an endless ocean
shivering to the moonlight
fingers’ irresistible touch.

Pulled into the moon’s domain
I saw you as you approached me
through the portal of its halo,
beckoning so powerfully
in between two pine trees,
expressly chosen to feature
in this uniquely charming play.

Caught by magic’s performance
we then moved into each other
while the red giant welcomed us
within his knowing amiable smile
and hid us upon his glowing face

where we still continue our dance.



Love,
Margherita
 
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Merit-Amun
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Dear Margherita,

You have embraced us again with your magic.
The universe smiles with the giant moon,
and it touches all of us.

Love, Inda

 
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Thank you dear Margherita.

I have just come back from a short trip enjoying the last of the beautiful fall colours, and there was a full moon. I saw it was smiling; it was enjoying your poetry, casting a beautiful light on it, making us all feel happy and peaceful.

Love,
yoko

 
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Thank you Margherita.

Your words are always beautiful, it makes the giant red moon smile, and me.
Thank you kindly for sharing your poetry with us.

Sincerely,
Gisele
 
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Thank you for this beautiful gift dear Margherita.
You have really captured the image in so many lovely words.

A few days ago the moon was truly a red giant, and you could actually see a smiling face. Smile

Love,
Vicky 2Hearts

 
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Thank you dear Margherita.

You have painted us a lovely picture of the smiling red moon.
I saw it as well a few days ago, and it was definitely smiling.

Love,
Sue

 
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Aaahhhhhhh dearestestestest dpm (dancing pearly Margherita) you are so amazing! Asian Such beautiful words! Colors Typing Clap

quote:
Originally posted by dear Margherita:

...I saw you as you approached me
through the portal of its halo...
Ha ha! You saw me in the portal of the moon's halo... mmm...



So many intoxicatingly breathtaking replies here, I simply love Yoko's:

I saw it was smiling; it was enjoying your poetry, casting a beautiful light on it, making us all feel happy and peaceful.

Such a beautiful event is taking place...

Love and *LIGHT* *BEING*, Teo Do (Re, Mi, Fa, Soul....) Viking Violin Dancers Love2 Hug

May I have this dance?

Moon Dance
 
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Thank you from my heart, dear Inda, Yoko, Gisele, Vicky, Sue and Teo, for telling me with such generous words that you liked this.

It was just full moon time again ... and I had a spectacular view with halo just a few moments before the cloud swallowed it ...


Love,
Margherita 2Hearts
 
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