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And as we part in temporary
ways.

Remember me only with
your senses.

Taste me near with parted lips and
breathe my scent across your
borders.

I will come to you.

Spread your fingers to the night and I will
sweep your hand as distance.

Hear my voice in silent notes
captured by the breeze.

And I will sing you closer.

Hold me with your sight as I fall
against the daybreak.

I will bring to you the new morning.

Remember me...in the depth of
all your senses.

I will come to you.


Love,
Eric
 
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Good stuff. . . Applause
 
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Thank you Eric.

I am very happy to find your touching poem on Givnology. Sensitive, as always,

Love,
Sue Cat Cat2

 
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Dear Eric,
Thank you for your lovely poem.
I am so happy to see you again on Givnology.

Love
Vicky 2Hearts

 
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Dear Eric,

This is very sensitive and beautiful
Thank you for sharing it with us.
I am always captivated by your delicate
words.

Love, Inda

 
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aaaahhhhhhh......
Eric, that is so beautiful.


Susan


 
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Thank you Eric.

I enjoy reading your poetry.
It has a very sensitive touch.

Love,
yoko

 
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quote:
Originally posted by dear Ericc:

...Hear my voice in silent notes
captured by the breeze.

And I will sing you closer...

Clap Thank you for sharing dear Eric! Kiss

Rememberable! or would it be memorable? Memberable? Remembered? he he.. Roll Eyes

Love and light being, Teo Do (Re, Mi, Fa...) Beethoven Violin Hula Hump Dancers Doggy Doggy


Walk softly but carry a BIG PEACE


Ole!!!!!
 
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Thank you Eric.

This is a wonderful surprise.
I have missed your poems.
I still read your books very often and they give me a great deal of pleasure.

Sincerely,
Gisele
 
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quote:
Hear my voice in silent notes
captured by the breeze.

And I will sing you closer.


The whole poem is really a charming flow of infinite tenderness. I just saw that Teo too quoted the above words ... To sing your love closer is simply beyond beautiful.

Love,
Margherita Smile

Dawn song:

 
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Thank you Eric, your words conjure up beautiful images in my mind, of love surviving any distant. A poem that has yet again touched my soul on a personal level. Beautiful!
 
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Sonny...

This is my favorite of yours along with "Your every tear".

There is so much tenderness here. AWWW.........


Love,
Sylvie


Amritsaya Putrah : We are sons of immortality...
 
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