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There is a mystery whispered
timeless
through the breeze,

Aahhh...you are the breeze
and I -
I am the secret carried by
your wind.

And birds sing
graceful
to the air,

Huuu...you are their muse,
and I -
voiceless...take flight
within your song.

There is a story
lost
within your eyes,

Aahhh...I listen as a thousand
untold tales speak silent as
a tear.

This is our story.


~
I love you,
Eric
 
Posts: 540 | Location: Columbia | Registered: Tue May 06 2003Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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Eric! How wonderful to have you here blessing us with your infinite beauty!
While reading your exquisite poem, I had Donizetti's music on my ears ... "Ange si pur" (La Favorita). My god, the combination of this divine melody and your equally divine poem has just been a truly precious moment. A nourishment for the soul.
Thank you, Masterpoet of Love.
I love you.
Margherita

____________________ Smile

On a dolphin’s back
I ride my ocean of tears
she giggles me through


senryu by Margherita
 
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Hey You...yes you, Merlin the Love Wizard, this is a most exquisite poem. Ah the muse must love you so much soulbrother.

I love you,
Sylvie
 
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Dear Eric

the breeze bears so much
of the untold and of
our longings....

I find so much beauty
in this poem

love,

Lilie
 
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Dear Poet,

Thank you for weaving this exquisitely
beautiful and graceful poem.
It caresses the heartstrings
of the soul.

Love, Inda
 
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Your golden words have
touched my heart with
holy love.
Blessings abound...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

~~~BARBARA

YE ARE THE LIGHT OF THE WORLD!
 
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Thank you very much
for this beautiful gift.
Words are not enough to
express my gratitude.

Gisele
 
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Thank you Eric.

I love your poetry.
This is a real beauty.

Christina
 
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Thank you for sharing your beautiful "mystery whispered" words here dear Eric.

You ARE such a gift.

Lovebeams, Teo Wink

May you find yourself in the world, and may you enjoy the company.
 
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This mysterious breeze...i feel it with it's own delight!!

Thank you,for this beautiful poem!

Love,
-AKK!
 
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