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What if I draw your lips
So very, very close to mine,

And with closed eyes...

Almost feel the fire
Consuming us with desire!

What if I draw your hands
Wrapped thight around my waist,

And with closed eyes...

Almost feel you move
Deep inside of me

As if you are
Never far
But a breath away...


Wherever you are now
Wherever you may ever be

With closed eyes
Always can I
Dream you...
Feel you...
So close to me!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

© Sylvie Giroux 2008


Amritasya Putrah: We are sons of immortality...

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Posts: 230 | Location: Mirabel, Quebec, Canada | Registered: Mon Apr 09 2007Reply With QuoteReport This Post
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Dear Sylvie, it is very nice to see you back on Givnology.
I have missed reading your beautiful poetry.

Thank you.
This poem is very sensitive
and filled with deep emotion.

Love,
yoko

 
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Thank you dear Sylvie for sharing your lovely and very sensitive poem with us.

It is very nice to see you back on Givnology.
We have missed you.

Love, Inda
**********

Susa Seddon Boulet

 
Posts: 4330 | Location: Toronto, Ontario, Canada | Registered: Sat Apr 26 2003Reply With QuoteReport This Post
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Smile Welcome back, dear Sylvie! I am really happy to find you here today.

Ahh, when we close our eyes a new world opens and brings powerful emotions, like your beautiful poem!

Passionate and tender all together!


Love,
Margherita 2Hearts

 
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Welcome back dear Sylvie.
Thank you for posting your beautiful poem for us to read.

Love,
Vicky 2Hearts

 
Posts: 2152 | Location: Toronto, Ontario, Canada | Registered: Wed Aug 06 2003Reply With QuoteReport This Post
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Thank you Sylvie.
I have missed you too.
Thank you for coming back and sharing your poetry with us once again.

Sincerely,
Gisele
 
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Thank you Sylvie.

It is nice to read your poetry again,
and very nice to find you on Givnology.
I think that we all have missed you.

Love,
Sue

 
Posts: 1803 | Location: Toronto, Ontario, Canada | Registered: Mon Dec 22 2003Reply With QuoteReport This Post
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Aaahhhh.. serene Sylvie! How uplifting!

Kiss Asian

Thank you for giving us this KILIWIA STARANZA DANEBE gift! Applause And what beautiful responces... mmm... love echoes!

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Originally posted by dear Margherita:
Smile Welcome back, dear Sylvie! I am really happy to find you here today.

Ahh, when we close our eyes a new world opens and brings powerful emotions, like your beautiful poem!

Passionate and tender all together!
Amen and Awomen! Tongue

Thanks ever so..

Love and *LIGHT BEING*, Teom CoolDance Violin Beethoven Dancers Cloud9 Cloud9


Walk softly but carry a BIG PEACE
 
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Thank you all for your warm comments and nice words.

I have missed all of you too!

Love,
Sylvie 2Hearts


Amritasya Putrah: We are sons of immortality...

http://www.poetrypoem.com/danebe
 
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