Time goes by
Hours pass
And within an instant
Eyes turn into
Pools of sadness

Salty rivers roll down
Breaking some chains
Still the soul
A dry land remains

Moments ago
United we stood
Two being one

Now all seems lost
As I stand alone, left outside
Of what was us.

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Love,
Sylvie

Thank you Sylvie.
This is very touching and beautifully written.

Love,
Sue

Dear Sylvie,
Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with us. We are all very happy that you remember to post for us here on Givnology.

Love
Vicky

Thank you both..it is a privilege for me to share my writings with you all.

Now, this poem is reflecting what I am going through right now and I would not mind a prayer or two

Love,
Sylvie

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Originally posted by dear Danebe:

..it is a privilege for me to share my writings with you all.

It is a true privilege for us!

Beautiful poem dear Sylvie! Thanks googols for thinking of us and sharing your wise words!
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Dear Sylvie,

This is very beautiful.
Thank you very much for sharing.

Love, Inda

Beautiful and sensitive Sylvie.
Thank you very much for posting.

Love,
yoko

Dear Sylvie,

Thank you for your beautiful poem.
I really appreciate your beautiful writing.
It is kind of you to share it with us.

Love,
Gisele

quote:

As I stand alone, left outside
Of what was us.

Your touching words, dear Sylvie, transmit a powerful, deep deep sense of separateness.

There are such moments when we really feel cast outside of what seemed solid and eternal ... one thing is sure: deep pain, like deep joy inspire the poet to create with utmost intensity, as you show here.

Loving you, Starry Sky!
Margherita

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