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ICICLES

Our summer smiles and love sighs
withered along with the star flowers
at the first yawns and signs of weariness
of nature’s luscious dance of transition.

Our pond’s ripples reflected happiness
before the cold winds created a frown
on the truthful mirror of our souls
and the waters swallowed our glow.

The velvet carpet of brilliant green
where we used to dance and dream,
archived upon distant memory shelves
and buried under thick layers of ice.

This love was thought to be eternal
forever blessed and kissed by the stars
meant to parade in daylight for all to see
in its airy elegance and swanlike purity.

Now my lonely steps resound in the night
the white willows are heavy with icicles
dangling from the branches like moonlit lamps
as if solemnly celebrating our own hibernated light.

Will you visit again this place where we froze
to ice statues upon streams of sudden pain?
Will we once more breathe universe together
and resurrect our love into a second Spring?



 
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ICICLES

Our summer smiles and love sighs
withered along with the star flowers
at the first yawns and signs of weariness
of nature’s luscious dance of transition.

Our pond’s ripples reflected happiness
before the cold winds created a frown
on the truthful mirror of our souls
and the waters swallowed our glow.

The velvet carpet of brilliant green
where we used to dance and dream,
archived upon distant memory shelves
and buried under thick layers of ice.

This love was thought to be eternal
forever blessed and kissed by the stars
meant to parade in daylight for all to see
in its airy elegance and swanlike purity.

Now my lonely steps resound in the night
the white willows are heavy with icicles
dangling from the branches like moonlit lamps
as if solemnly celebrating our own hibernated light.

Will you visit again this place where we froze
to ice statues upon streams of sudden pain?
Will we once more breathe universe together
and resurrect our love into a second Spring?

Penguin

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Such beautiful images, of frozen water! Amazing!

Thank you for taking us on your: The velvet carpet of brilliant green...

Love and light being, Teo Do (Re, Mi, Fa, So, LaaAAAAA!!!!!) Hug Dancers Violin Beethoven CoolDance CoolDance



Walk softly but carry a BIG PEACE
 
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May it all work. Wow it does! Amen.
 
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Thank you Margherita.
This is very beautiful,
and deeply touching.

quote:
Will you visit again this place where we froze
to ice statues upon streams of sudden pain?
Will we once more breathe universe together
and resurrect our love into a second Spring?


Love,
yoko

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Dear Margherita,

The beauty of your words shines with brilliance, casting a glow into eternity.

Love,
Inda

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Thank you dear Margherita for your beautiful poem.
We have a lot of ice and snow here now, but everything looks much more brilliant with your beautiful words.

Love,
Vicky 2Hearts

 
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Dear Margherita

Thank you for the crystalline sparkle of your words.
I am beginning to like the icicles.They are everywhere at the moment.

Love,
Sue Cat Cat

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Thank you Margherita.

As always, I enjoy your beautiful writing.
Thank you for posting it on Givnology
for all of us to enjoy.

Love,
Gisele
 
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