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Picture of Danebe
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Our eyes
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These eyes I love,
Once shining with wonder,
Are now pools of sadness
Where hope seems to have drowned.

Love, I cry your tears...
This pain still lingering,
I see within your eyes.

Love, I cry my tears
For these eyes of yours
Reflect more than just the sun...

These salty drops
Powerful beyond words
Brake through barriers
Of rocks
To mend and heal
Heart and soul.

These eyes you love,
May now be sad and wet
Though
Will soon mirror and reflect
All the beauty you can hold.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Love,
Sylvie Ying
 
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Dear Sylvie, this is touchingly beautiful!

The tears dry
through Love,
as the dewdrops
dry in the sun.

I love you, Margherita Smile

**************************

I’m open to love
my heart invites you to dance
come share my delight


senryu by Margherita
 
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Teo
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Very moving dear Sylvie!

Sometimes this is why I have the shades on... Cool

Wishing the best solutions to come out just right sweety Typing Nut Tongue Cat2 Tweety Asian

Lovebeams to beam 1 up, Teo InLove

You can't force peace, only show it.
 
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Merit-Amun
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Thank you Sylvie,
This is so very beautiful.
It really touches me.

love, Inda
 
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