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Traveler's thoughts
~~~~~~~~~~~ A long trip I took Along the world of myself Thinking that the paths traveled Were altogether A different entity, Founding so many, harsh and bumpy. Curses on my very lips And tears rolling I made a point to lay still. I wondered why life Would draw such difficult roads And unclear ways On the canvas of the many. Each instant spent pondering Was, to my surprise Bringer of answers Not dreamed imaginable Even in my "non-action" Everything was moving The bumps would not dispear Nor the harshness evaporate Then I understood ... The paths were as I would feel them Create them and traveled them. I was the bumps and the cracks I was all the roads I ever been on... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love, Sylvie Amritsaya Putrah : We are sons of immortality... |
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Thank you Sylvie.
This is beautiful and very deep. Sue |
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Dear Sylvie,
It is so nice to read another one of your beautiful poems this morning. Thank you for sharing it on Givnology. Love Vicky |
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Dear Sylvie,
Thank you for taking us on such a melancholy, but beautiful path. Love, Inda ![]() |
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This is wonderful dear Sylvie Staranza
It is great you "made a point to lay still" to see "I was all the roads I ever been on..." So... tread lightly on yourself! he he.. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts! I am really overjoyed to find your great poems here! Mmmmm... what roads shall I be today? ... mmmm... nice traveling trip tip! he he.. Love and light being, Teo Walk softly but carry a BIG PEACE |
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