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Traveler's thoughts
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A long trip I took
Along the world of myself
Thinking that the paths traveled
Were altogether
A different entity,
Founding so many, harsh and bumpy.

Curses on my very lips
And tears rolling
I made a point to lay still.

I wondered why life
Would draw such difficult roads
And unclear ways
On the canvas of the many.

Each instant spent pondering
Was, to my surprise
Bringer of answers
Not dreamed imaginable

Even in my "non-action"
Everything was moving
The bumps would not dispear
Nor the harshness evaporate

Then I understood ...
The paths were as I would feel them
Create them and traveled them.
I was the bumps and the cracks
I was all the roads I ever been on...

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Love,
Sylvie Ying


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Thank you Sylvie.

This is beautiful
and very deep.

Sue Cat Cat2
 
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Dear Sylvie,
It is so nice to read another one of your beautiful poems this morning. Thank you for sharing it on Givnology.

Love
Vicky 2Hearts
 
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Dear Sylvie,

Thank you for taking us on such a melancholy, but beautiful path.

Love, Inda

 
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This is wonderful dear Sylvie Staranza Clap

It is great you "made a point to lay still" to see "I was all the roads I ever been on..." Ying Ying sweety sweety

So... tread lightly on yourself! he he.. Nut

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts! I am really overjoyed to find your great poems here! Love2 Ladysman Wave

Mmmmm... what roads shall I be today? ... mmmm... nice traveling trip tip! he he..

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