With total abandon


When your eyes lock with mine
my freedom blends with yours,
our thoughts cast somersaults
and there is laughter for a while,
until the ear drumming subsides.

Our breath creates a new sound
that has not been given a name yet,
but we keep the magical note going
and balance on its wide extension
intrepid like skilled rope dancers.

When our arms hold the world
and we see through and beyond
the defiant walls of inbuilt caution
you move the first dancing step
and I follow you with total abandon.

We leave footprints in sky meadows
upon the shorelines of universe
and within each other’s heart space.
We expand as far as the echoes of love
cast randomly into the ether of forever.

When your eyes lock with mine
my freedom blends with yours, yes.
We surrender to the gravitational pull,
like the tides of our eternal soul
we rise and fall with total abandon.



Love,
Margherita

Dear Margherita,

Thank you for your deeply touching words.
I am just relaxing at my cottage, looking at the lake and enjoying your beautiful writing, which blends in harmoniously with the magic of nature.

Love, Inda

Thank you, dear Inda, for reading and commenting so lovingly.
I would love to sit with you and enjoy the beauty of the lake and the peaceful surroundings ...
I do miss my own lake you know!
I love to breathe near the water. It induces meditative thoughts.
Have a wonderful time!
Love and hugs.
Margherita

Bravo!

quote:

...Our breath creates a new sound
that has not been given a name yet,
but we keep the magical note going...

Mmmm... listening quietly! Taking notes! hehe..

quote:

We leave footprints in sky meadows
upon the shorelines of universe...

quantum-verse? Allverse. Aaaahhhh... you are .. UNIVERSATILE! he he..

I hope it's OK making this song auto-play in your poem here , I was listening to this funny tone version of Liebestraum, is this still your pseudo-nym?

Keep your feet firmly in the air dearestest dpm!


Love and LIGHT*BEING, Teo Do (Re, Mi, Fa, Soul....)

Oh, dear Teolove, thank you for the musical accompaniment with Liebestraum!! How magical, I was just carried off into the land of dreams upon these wonderful notes. Yes I still call myself Liebestraum on the Peak.

Thank you for your warm and creative comment. It's good to be Universalists! I recognize one when I see/hear one.

Here the week-end is ending, time to go sleep ... and get ready for a busy week again.

This was just a beautiful moment of joy. Thank you.
Love and joy.
Margherita

That is quite a beautiful poem Margherita! You are so kind to us to post it here. Thank you googols.

Allow me to take this opportunity to elaborate a few points, for clarity and usefulness. Permesso per favore

quote:

Originally posted by dear Margherita:
Yes I still call myself Liebestraum on the Peak.

Margherita is Liebestraum:
Inspiration Peak Prayer for Myanmar and China

That is the NEW BOARDS at the Peak, the old ones are still linked in our BoardRoom. That has Teo's old topics and lovely replies by Inspiration Peakers.

Regarding Teo's embedding the music in this poem. Unlike many boards, blogs and user submitting opportunities, here in the Givnology Wellness Arts Forums, one can embed an audio file, be it aif (.aif), wav (.wav) or midi (.mid). The way to do this is:

• Find the midi file you want to link to. Here are some pretty ones from http://WebPageExperience.com/mid/ :
  
  

  ChopinBe-newagepad.mid 19-Jun-2007 13:06 3k ChopinBe-piano.mid 19-Jun-2007 13:06 3k ChopinChops.mid 14-Jun-2007 15:59 2k ChopinEmprelude-inpr..> 08-Jun-2007 15:20 9k ChopinMazurka01.mid 09-Jun-2007 14:20 4k ChopinNocturneinBbmi..> 14-Jun-2007 14:07 2k ChopinPreludeInEMino..> 07-Jun-2007 15:48 4k ConSolo01.mid 07-Jun-2007 15:48 2k Enchant%8ee.mid 05-Sep-2007 21:47 2k EnchantedWaltze.mid 05-Sep-2007 21:48 2k Enchantedness.mid 05-Sep-2007 22:17 2k Liebestraum-NewAge.mid 05-Jun-2007 14:49 14k FlowerDuet-inprocess 18-Mar-2008 14:49 7k Right click the title and choose "Copy Link" or "Copy Shortcut"

  
  
  
• To use EnchantedWaltz above, you would put the following in the post topic:
  
  

  <bgsound src=http://webpageexperience.com/mid/EnchantedWaltze.mid autostart=true>

  
  
  
• Test it by loading the page, and if you have different web browsers perhaps try each one. The Liebestraum song in THIS page uses a sound called "New Age" which is a little different on each computer. This is a neat thing because each time it is played it is a little different, sort of personalized.

I sincerely hope you don't mind my interjecting this techno-babble into your beautiful poem post Margherita. I felt it an opportune time to share how the music is embedded, and the link to the new Peak board. Thank you for indulging.

hello, dear indescribebabble

I enjoy your technical knowledge sharing! I might give it a try when I will have more time. Love the musical accompaniment to a poem, that's great!

Good that you posted the new link to the inspirationpeak, which is a nice site too.

Thanks googles. Now where have I heard that?

love
Margherita

Dear Margherita, thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry.
This is a lovely way to start the workday.
Reading your poetry always gives me confidence that the world still has beauty to offer.

Love,
Vicky

Thank you dear Margherita.
This is so beautiful.
Reading your poem takes my mind away from the sorrows of this world.

Love,
Sue

Thank you Margherita for remembering to share your beautiful writing with us.

It gives me great pleasure to visit my friends so that I can come to Givnology and read the nice material posted here.

Sincerely,
Gisele

Dear Margherita,

Thank you for your truly magical words.
They touch my soul deeply.



Love,
yoko

Thank you too from my heart dear Vicky, Sue, Gisele and Yoko. What a joy to read your loving replies!

You bless me with your kindness, my friends.

Love and joy.
Margherita




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