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When The Dam Breaks

When the dam breaks,
I can’t fight back the tears,
All emotions come flooding,
Through all my thoughts and fears.

It rushes upon me,
Knocking me to my feet,
I close my eyes,
And drown in its defeat.

I sink towards the bottom,
Never reaching the ground,
Floating and drifting endlessly,
Without making a sound.

I raise my hand,
Towards the reflecting light,
Hoping to grasp onto something,
To not die without a fight.

And as I reach,
Sinking towards the end,
I feel the warmth of a touch,
Of a companion, a friend.

Breathing life into me,
My soul becomes alive,
And when the dam did break,
Your love helped me to survive.


by: Tim Cannon

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Smile today, you are loved.

"There are only two ways to live your life:
One is as though nothing is a miracle,
The other is as though everything is a miracle.

I believe in the latter."

~~ Einstein

-from here


Walk softly but carry a BIG PEACE
 
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Dear Teo,
Thank you for posting Tim's sensitive and deeply touching poem.

This adds life to my soul.

Love, Inda

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Thank you Teo for sharing Tim's beautiful and sensitive poem. Everything that he writes is beautiful.

Sue Cat Cat2 2Hearts
 
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Thank you Teo.
Tim's writing is very beautiful.

Love 2Hearts
Vicky

 
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Thank you dear Teo for sharing Tim's powerful poem here again.

May dear Tim always know how much he is loved ...

Love, Margherita Smile

 
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