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Crystal core
~~~~~~~

Chamber Deep
Crystal core
Reflecting
Pink and White

See, open up
Hear, speak up…

Of what makes you Be
Tell the story...
As lovers listen
To the silence

Chamber Deep
Crystal Core
Reflecting
Pink and White
Colors Of
Luminescent
Love and light

Chamber deep
Crystal core
Ah, you my heart
Are a true delight.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Love,
Sylvie Ying
 
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<bracha>
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Oh, Sylvie....

I can so well orient
myself in this chamber
....

thank you! Beautiful!

Love,

Lilie
 
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Merit-Amun
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Dear Sylvie,

Thank you for this
delicately woven poem.
I can just see the pink
light in the facets
of the crystal.

Love, Inda

[This message was edited by Inda on Friday May 16th, 2003 at 06:11 PM.]
 
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Merit-Amun
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Dear Sylvie,
I wanted to add this pink and white flower to your poem, but I could not edit it, so I am adding it now. Your poem is as delicate as the pink and white flower.

Love, Inda

Pinkandwhiteflower
 
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Dear Sylvie,
Thank you for this beautiful poem!!Your words are food for our soul.

Love,
-AKK!

-AKK!
 
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